The Captain (Sketch)
Posted by
Major Tom
on Friday, September 25, 2009
The captain walks slowly with a limp in his left leg like an injured rescue dog. His beard is a forest at midnight, a dark shade of black to contrast the pale, moonlight white of his face. His amber eyes reflect a threatening sunset. He commands his crew with a thunderous voice and the pointer finger of Zeus, lightning casted upon pointing and ordering. He wields a sharpened sword, a sharpened eye and most importantly a sharpened tongue that impales his enemies upon contact, sending them hastily to their graves. The seas and the winds obey his word and the earth trembles at his fury. As his ship is tempest tossed he stands calm, with his flask in his mouth and his finger directing the subordinate crew, attempting to save lives with conviction and determination. His dusty hands constantly hold the shoulders of his crewmen.
4 comments:
I like it but I am a little confued by the last line. The metaphores are cool.
I like how you use words that create a mood. Dig it.
Great sketch! Really enjoyed the vivid imagery you provided.
Already I'm getting a feel for this guy. Powerful description super man. Your writing style is a psychedelic space octopus waiting to happen. The ocean is nice. And I like ships. Everything in the world is insane.
G'night Ned.
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